One

Location

91701
United States
34° 8' 8.4012" N, 117° 36' 50.9256" W
See map: Google Maps

One step
Twelve inches closer
One beat
A pound of the drum
One moment
A fraction of a lifetime
One person
An individual
One chance
To prove myself
One life
To live the best I can

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

10 years ago

enjoy how you use the word one and connect it to something menaingful

continue to write and build ideas

thatjasminekidd

10 years ago

you are the only person that has ever commented on any of my poems, so thank you! this is an old one but it still means a lot(:

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