oh undying love

Fri, 08/23/2013 - 23:36 -- HollyB

 Oh undying love

That I called out your name as I tossed my dreams out to sea

If ever you were to leave this world

And ascend to heaven like the angel you are

Then I would lay in the earth beside you

Come now

You walk on hope and your voice is that of a thousand rolling drums

So steady and deep

Intense and satisfying

Dearest of them all

I have given you my heart

To which you do not know you are in ownership of

But I don’t even have to cry when you leave me

Because I will hide in the shadows of your mind

And creep up in your thoughts

Without even having to try

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