The Odd One
Location
31419
United States
31° 58' 14.9268" N, 81° 9' 31.1472" W
See map: Google Maps
When you plunge
into this world
Do not be afraid to breath.
Take in this sea
let my hand free
And become a fish of many.
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jwiener
12 years ago
I really like how the middle of the poem rhymes, with the lines "Take in this sea / let my hand free" because it adds to the tension and imagery of the poem. Great work! If you are interested in writing more simple poems that pack a big punch, check out "poetry writing tips" for acrostic and haiku poems in the "resources" section!