O! Dear, Father.

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11226
United States
40° 38' 49.5312" N, 73° 57' 13.0176" W

Oh ! Dear Father.
I once thought a father needs to support their child
A father suppose to be the star of a child life
A father needs to love and care for their child
But, you brought darkness into my life
Oh! You father
How could you become such a wicked father
When we were like the stars and the skys
But that wind
Got me all confused and jumble
Took you away from your own kin
That is when i noticed my world crumble
Oh ! You, father
We have to end up here
I am sorry but life has becoming too strong
So, let's keep the wall between us
So we shall live peacefully
Oh ! You father
Why am i now such a bother.

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