numb

My fingers move like rusty chains
I hear the creaking of my bones as I try to move them
My fingers are numb

My toes and knees are as heavy as rocks
They shake as much as the trees
I can no longer feel my knees

I hear the crackle of thunder echoing throughout the mountains
Next thing I know I’m soaked in rain
Feels so cold

I feel the cold like it is running through my blood
I feel so heavy
I can’t stand up
My whole body is numb

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