Not Alone

Thu, 11/15/2012 - 12:21 -- dobski5

All around me

Negative and critical,

Crushing my dreams.

World suffocating,

I am all alone.

Crying out to the world,

No one answers.

But then a ray

A glorious ray,

Shines through the darkness.

Glowing brighter,

Ever closer.

Friend.

Keeper of my heart.

No longer alone.

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dobski5

Even when all seems dim and full of despair, I have found that my friends will always be there.

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