no way out

Tue, 08/12/2014 - 22:05 -- matsuma

theres a girl down the lane,

that pops pills to kill her pain, 

she tells me her secrect,

 but should i tell,

shes a friend,

 shes wonderful an dear,

when she smiles it takes you berath away,

i dont want to lose her so i tell her to ask for help,

now she hates me but,

shes always loved,

i tell someone to help they listen dearly ,

now she get the help she need,

no more poping pills to kill her pain,

now talking her pian out ,

to keep bething out

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