No New Friends

You say you started from the bottom now your here

But I see you standing with your shade over there

Sucess is my reality

Grade A quality

You're talking about me loudly 

But my hearings kinda cloudy

So come and say it to my face 

Before I spray you with some mace

And you forget the time and place

So just shut up and stay safe.


MVP-Most Valuable Poet

poem sounds angry

sounds like you been betrayed, even judges upon

life presents many obstacles, it happens

always be proud of yoursef and those that love you will accept you

don't entertain people's ignornace

you are better

keep writing

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