No control..left in me

Sun, 05/05/2013 - 21:20 -- choi95

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80528
United States
40° 29' 17.7828" N, 104° 59' 50.2908" W

My body hard as a rock
so uncontrollable
My heart pounding like a drum
so unstoppable
My eyes rolling in swirls
so turnable

My body shaking like a rattle
so irresistible
My head buzzing like a bee
so unmanageable

I'm so unstable...

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