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here we go again

gosh, how to begin

everything happened by chance

now i am stuck in his trance

he seems too good to be true

feeling roses are red, violets are blue

just the other day

before i passed his way

forever alone is what i claim

funny how i don't feel the same

forever i want to be

just him and me

wrapped in his arms

hypnotize by his charm

it feels insane

just want to be his Lois Lane

makes me laugh and smile

happier than i have been in a while

i don't understand

feels like standing in quicksand

falling kinda fast

hoping this will last

with this the poem ends

my new chapter begins

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Alhaire

Very good structure uage in this poem. The feel and flow of this peice is equisite. It hit me down deep real dep...

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