Never Have I Fallen

Your lips speak soft sweetness
Your touch a cool caress
I am lost in your magic
My heart beats within your chest

I think of you each morning
And dream of you each night
I think of your arms being around me
And cannot express my delight

Never have I fallen
But I am quickly on my way
You hold a heart in your hands
That has never before been given away
 

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

"Never have I fallen/But I am quickly on my way." Absolutely brilliant. This poem was sweet and gave off the feeling of a lullaby- a comforting rhythm that you meekly know because of the feelings it gives you. I love how you gave a tinge of a danger when you use the word fallen in this piece, especially after all the sweet words in the beginning- because it just shows that people are still afraid- it is still a risk. Thank you so much for sharing this piece.

Rebecca

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