My Saviors

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I was stuck in the big vast ocean.

Alone, treading endlessly

Until I could tread no more,
and the water consumed me

I was lost in the ocean
forever
and forgot how to flow with life

Until you ALL rescued me and helped
me swim to shore again.

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