My Own Universe

Thu, 01/30/2020 - 14:14 -- pdquang

I take criticism, I take pain, I take risks.

Was it worth it? Why tries so hard?

I can't control my self,  my brain is contagious. 

Too much pain, too much thoughts.

Worthless feelings, now my heart just as a piece of clay.

 

My own universe,

But I can't! I can't define it, I can't define my self.

It's a loss mess, so don't you enter it yourself.

I wouldn't dare, I wouldn't stop. I consumed. 

So get away from me. 

 

My own universe, is my hell loop.

It felt like an eternity. I can't escape from it.

Demons, they're like diseases.

Oh trust me, they already ripping me off.

 

Pleases, just leave me alone.

 

My arms is calling me.

Just one cut, one pain will disappear

Just another one, I could erase another pain

And just the right cut, criticism will no longer be with me. 

And just that last cut, my own universe has been spared. 

 

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

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