My Love

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My love for you is like a river

It flows and flows.

When you whisper in my ear, I shiver.

My love just grows and grows.

 

When you're holding me,

In my eyes you look.

My great love you can see,

I become an open book.

 

Our first kiss-

I'll always remember.

A day I wouldn't miss-

When we met in September.

 

My love grows and grows

Like a river, it flows and flows.

 

 

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i enjoy the rhythm of this poem

it has a melodious style that i like

its very sincere and emotionally passionate

keep writing and build

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