my husband


United States
40° 8' 44.484" N, 86° 14' 10.2264" W

To my husband,my lover, my partner,my best friend,my soulmate,my forever, until the end. we may not be where we thought we would at this point in our lives, but we are right where we belong which is together and baby trust me we will survive because we have eachother,i know things are rough, but each day brings new problems, especially while you are cuffed, but no matter what happens ill love you forever, which is why we tied the knot on September 19TH, 2011.



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