my friend shines like a star

my is there when i need her when im sad she makes my l she there when i need her  my friend shinse like a star she shinse brighter then the stars times 3 if you ask my friend 1 or 2 if we are together she with say ya oh my friend times 9 my friend shinse like a star 

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