MY ETERNAL LASS

Location

560096
India
13° 1' 3.5832" N, 77° 38' 42.0792" E

I thought of our past years
Which was as lovely as a rose
My eyes were twinkling with tears
Dancing on my cheeks, to you it bows

We talked with open heart and tongue
Till the church clock chimes
As a pair, though we were young
And made witty rhymes

To seek thee did I rove
Breaking the silence of seas,
All my way, I bore thee my love,
Which is eternal, but not a lease,

My eyes are crying,
By the tears of your beauty.
From my heart its flowing,
Carrying my love in plenty...

Comments

jwiener

This is a beautiful poem, and has such a nice flow. Also, you send a very powerful message about how love, even if it begins when we are young, can be eternal.

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