Is this my end?

Sat, 12/07/2013 - 15:03 -- mkelley

Crimson liquid runs

Free down my body

Tears fall wtih this liquid

The silver blade in me

It shines.

 

Thud,

Was it me that made

That sound?

 

Bright white light,

I don't want to see you.

Is this my end?

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