My brother

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 19:33 -- Maribel

Location

79925
United States
31° 47' 42.1836" N, 106° 21' 29.3508" W

My brother, loving, dedicated, succeeded did not in academy, encourage cubs to not follow but to strive for him not to be.

Family formed, there, still struggle sustain to better, remains strong, caring for his little one, hurting no one.

For him i do love but do not wish to live his life. Succeed i shall to prove him wrong that to late is not in his name. Future he shall have if he follows my blueprint he made me leave, to step over his to not trace and repeat.

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