My Best Brazell

Everything was good.
Everything was fine.
That day will never leave my mind.
After all I’ve gone through, nothing hurts more than this.
The one I trusted ends up hurting me in the chest.
We were so lovely, so close and so sweet.
Inseparable, I can say the least.
Your red hair like fire, your dimples I loved.
But that is not saying what I will miss the most.
You were so simple, so caring and kind.
Nothing to be afraid of, I was so comfortable and content.
Your arms were so welcoming, my favorite part.
Now that’s long gone.
I don’t know where it went wrong.
Hope we can still be close friends.
You were the best in the end.

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