My Angel's Eyes

My Angel's eyes cease to cry
Begging her will to hold my hand
As I discover Joe left to fly
The dirt underneath my shoes like sand
I scream at God to give her back
Then she would feel only struggle, pain
Sneak my message of love through hack
Only to realize my request was oh so vain
Four years later I imagine you know
How much I think of him and you
His constant addiction struggle, the po
Having Faith and love for you too
In the end the sunset comes
Ceasing ever I don't play dumb

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

great job in expressing yourself

FireAndIce328

Thank you

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