Sun, 05/08/2016 - 01:49 -- MARs

You have to fall before you can fly, 

and you gotta scrape your knees 

before you reach the sky. 

So don't complain,

and don't sigh.

And when you think 

that you can't go on, well, 

gosh darn it, you just gotta try!


MVP-Most Valuable Poet

keep inspiring to be greater than your circumstances

press forward, upward & onward


I thought that with as much self doubt there is in the world, it would be nice to have a motivational poem.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

believe me when i say you will inspire

God is going to bless you with talents

give Him all the glory

promote your poems to my group


Thank you for all of your feedback. Recently I've 

been going through some hard things, but reading 

your comments have helped so much, reminding 

me that God will use me to help others, and that 

no one is useless and that everyone has a purpose.

Thank you so much, and God bless.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

by you expressing, that's power

continue to use that power for good

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