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Lvargas
Hey MVP this is luis, so um this is my first poem I've written since may before I graduated.
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Dark road by: Luis V
I walk down this road
the road that I discovered on my own
No one around me
no one near meĀ
I noticed this beautiful girl on my way homeĀ
but her eyes were glowing redĀ
she looked like the daughter of the devil
She told me to take the bite of the appleĀ
and my eyes will be open
but I just kept on walking and didn't take the bite out of the apple
What kind of woman is this?
A woman of good or a woman of evil?
Whatever it is I want no part of herĀ
So I just kept walking down this dark and lonely roadĀ
I kept on walking so that I can find the place that I was meant to go
As I kept walking I came across another womanĀ
A woman so sweet she took me inĀ
Took care of meĀ
I felt at peaceĀ
But love is all I ever need
Is this woman the right one for me?
I honestly do not knowĀ
but if she is then we'll run into each other again sometime down the futureĀ
But it's hard to believe that I had to leave her behindĀ
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Lvargas
Hey MVP this is luis, so um this is my first poem I've written since may before I graduated.
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Dark road by: Luis V
I walk down this road
the road that I discovered on my own
No one around me
no one near meĀ
I noticed this beautiful girl on my way homeĀ
but her eyes were glowing redĀ
she looked like the daughter of the devil
She told me to take the bite of the appleĀ
and my eyes will be open
but I just kept on walking and didn't take the bite out of the apple
What kind of woman is this?
A woman of good or a woman of evil?
Whatever it is I want no part of herĀ
So I just kept walking down this dark and lonely roadĀ
I kept on walking so that I can find the place that I was meant to go
As I kept walking I came across another womanĀ
A woman so sweet she took me inĀ
Took care of meĀ
I felt at peaceĀ
But love is all I ever need
Is this woman the right one for me?
I honestly do not knowĀ
but if she is then we'll run into each other again sometime down the futureĀ
But it's hard to believe that I had to leave her behindĀ
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Lvargas
I love your videos and I did subscirbe. Is that other channel still up the udl productions one?
Lvargas
Save me from who I am
Save me from who I'm going to be
Lord I don't understand what the hell is wrong with me
Why am I like this?
When I look into my future
While the world turns away from meĀ
All I can think of is why the hell am I like thisĀ
I can't deal with this rain anymoreĀ
The rain that I though went away
But it didn'tĀ
It was just hiding in the cloudsĀ
I'm trying to get just a little bit strongerĀ
But I don't have a friend in meĀ
I ain't got nowhere to goĀ
I ain't got nothing to doĀ
I'm trying to let goĀ
But the demons in me are holding onto meĀ
I'm trying to escape their gripsĀ
But they're holding onto me tightĀ
What the hell is going on?Ā
Why won't you guys let go of me?
Lord Save meĀ
I know I haven't been the sameĀ
But these poems that I write nowĀ
Aren't the same as I used to write in high schoolĀ
Lord save meĀ
I beg thee to come my wayĀ
And save meĀ
Save me from myself before it's to late.
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Lvargas
ok sorry but i don't know what was wrong with the first one I posted. But this poem is called save me and it's only my second oneĀ
I'm slowly returning to writing poetry again.
Lvargas
Thank MVP, heres a new poem I wrote 2 days ago
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Lvargas
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God by: Luis V
God I'm down
I need you to pick me up
I need you to fill my cup
I don't want the Devil to set me up
So God please help me
Here I am talking to you underneath this tree
But i kind of want to be close to the sea
Because i know you have the key
So God please set me free!
I can't guarantee that I'm not going to fail
Because i know down the road I'm going to slip up and fail
But Jesus were on those nailsĀ
So I know you'll forgive me if i fail
Because Jesus paid the price
Set me free through his blood
On the cross hanging on those nails
Yes i know somewhere down the road
Those females might distract me
But God i pray the you show me the right one
I want me and her to have fun
I want me and her to go on runs
So God please help me and don't let me go
Don't let me fall
I just want to catch a ball with you
Like maybe a baseball or football
God you will never fail me and i know that
So please just give the devil an uppercut.
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