morning light

Fri, 01/14/2022 - 15:03 -- dorankc

what a sight to behold,

your loving green eyes in the soft morning light.

i could reminesce for hours on end

upon the moments i have fallen deeper,

deeper into an unending love.


yet when your eyes meet mine

in the early morning's first cold light,

i am merely a drunkard, and you are my wine.


Paul T

I felt like this poem had a couplet style of rhyme scheme (ABA and CBC). I've been really into couplets lately so I think that the poem was good.


This peom really made me feel like as if I'm the one in love. Described the feelings really well.

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