This poem is really touch an it really does speak out to those who know what it means to be on the outside looking in, as your title implies: the misfits. It is strong piece and definitely a topic that you can stretch on and bring about more imagery and open up to more, and I love reading this. I would like to see you fix up the format so that it flows easier as your reading it, and doesn't read as choppy as it does now, cutting off what you're saying so sharply. All in all though, I loved this piece and thank you for sharing it.

Rebecca