Miracle of life

Thu, 06/17/2021 - 16:06 -- mrapook

Riding into the burnt sunset clouds
we decided to take a rest
watching the water burning
as we sat quietly on a lonely bench
 

the day was gently fading
while we held each other close
realizing your glowing beauty
and how we're never lost.
 

if we could only imbed this sight
forever in our dreaming eyes
then the day can never deminish
the miracle of our gracious lives.

 

*I encourage comments

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

Fatimazahratag

👌👌👌👌

mrapook

Don't know what that word means, lol, i can't even pronounce it.

But four Oh-Key-Doe-Keys... i guess you liked it.

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