Me Aging

Me aging
Slowly fading
No masquerades
Skin so thin
Hair around the ear
This is funny this is weird
What will become of these bones?
When I am in the fire ashes and alone-

In the winters cold
I grow old
I hunger to catch the beauty in the air
The time will come and the despair…
Clinging too tightly to the remains of life
This is the first complaint the on-going strife

With you I share this fear
My dear
Time is ticking and moving along
With my soul singing preparing the exit song
And yet I travail at the itching beneath the wound
As I sit at night and stare at the moon
And undo the stitch that will release my frozen desires
And finally quench this aching fire.

Photo: Elohim Om Lotus, Lisette.

Comments

jwiener

More than growing up, this poem really speaks of the fears we have as we age. You personify your soul, saying that it is singing, almost making your soul a separate entity from your actual self, which is a very interesting tactic.

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