Making His Home

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A little girl feels that


She will end up alone.


A young boy has no


Father figure within his home.


These things are well known,


But will change when I run my household.


 


My little girl or girls


Will know that a man


Cannot heal their loneliness by taking their hand


In marriage. They will know that there is a plan


And that God has them in his hand


So that they won’t feel alone ever again.


 


My young boy or boys,


Whether if they have their father or not,


Will know that God is their heavenly


Father, no matter what earthly father


They got. God will lead them for


He will be their strong rock.


 


A little girl feels that


She will end up alone.


A young boy has no


Father figure within his home.


These things will no longer be known,


When I allow God to run my household.

Comments

Bazzaro127

I like where your heads looking towards. I can't wait to see how life turns out when your older, I wish you good luck and also want to say that I love the poem that you made!:)

The Day-Dreamer

WOW THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM, and I say beautiful because a cannot find a stronger word for my emotion at this moment.  very very nice job, to God be the Glory. :)

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very expressively proud

beautifully written

you grew up and i hope that you live your life in your eyes, no one else

keep writing

Hobbe

I enjoyed this poem. It was like a story. It had a problem and it had a resolution. The determination to change the course of your life was strongly felt and contagious. Thank you.

Angelwith1wing

Thanks Hobbe for your comment! It really made my day:).

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