Make love

Location

33810
United States
28° 5' 25.9152" N, 82° 1' 8.0976" W

To make love
Pure as a dove
So intense
Ever since

My hearts beating
It is Deafening
Can you hear it
Do you feel it

You have the glue
Do you have a clue
The pieces laying there
Do you dare

Make me whole
You are never dull
Heart rate quickens
I'm am smitten

I'm not ready
This can be deadly
Lets take it slow
I don't want it to blow

Heart on my sleeve
Please don't leave
I've never felt this
Just give me a kiss

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

you write with much passion

very emoionally driven

this poem is endearing

continue to write and build off ideas

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