Loving Sister


Loving Sister

            Remarkable, a light I would follow

            Beautiful in each turn and curve

            You beam bright

            White in gold


            Through embers of pain you came

            Cinders, mopped with ash

            Arisen, un-mundane

             You seek out my imperfections


            Beholding a power

            Unlike any other

            Tranquil all around

            Via thick and thin


            You always win

            My heart abides by your words

            A slave I am not

            A brother I am


            For I only listen to oh so few

            You are a special case

            In fact, someone more

            My loving sister



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