A Lovely Surprise


The wind whips through my hair

The other cars zoom by

I peer towards my left,

And I say, “I can’t believe you’re mine.”


He smiles back at me

Our fingers intertwine

His other hand on the wheel

His jokes are the reason for my laugh lines


I really don’t know where we’re going,

And frankly I don’t care,

Just as long as I’m with him,

Happiness is in the air


We’re off on an adventure,

To anywhere but here

I think, maybe we’ll grab food,

But then he says, “Disneyland is near.”


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