Love in the Night Sky

Sun, 06/01/2014 - 17:32 -- hduane

It took me so long to notice

the setting of the moon.

The sunset is much more obvious

as the moon fades away slowly

like someone fades from love.

The lover is infatuated with the moon

and the stars are his every desire.

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