The Love of my life

Location

NE35 9DR
United Kingdom
54° 56' 58.8516" N, 1° 27' 23.0796" W

I will stand the test of time knowing that you are mine. The distance is bad we know this true, but on our worse day we can pull us through. I feel for you like no other, nor my father, sister or mother. This might be weird, this is true but I am showing my undivided love for you. Some say they have a favorite thing about their lover, but the way I see it you are like no other. Again the distance is a problem but I would never ruin what I have with you. You know me like you do so you know this to be true. Till the end of time you're sublime, I truly hope you are mine. You have Uni that's fine with me because I know what thou are to be. 8000 miles and 8 years looks long but how could I go wrong with you my little baby boo. For better or for worse, through tick and thin, my feeling for you will never change within. If this freaked you out I'm sorry but I can not tell you a lie even though you make me shy.

Comments

jwiener

Poetry is a great way for us to express our true feelings about the people we love, and this poem is a prime example of that. I really enjoyed how you made every line rhyme here, because it gave the poem an extra dimension and showed how you put so much heart and thought into writing it.

The_SoldierJak

Sorry about not replying sooner. Thank you, it means a lot for someone to make such a positive comment on something that I put so much time and feeling into. Yet again massive thanks :)

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