Love Me Not

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 10:35 -- sfurlow

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How you came upon me was like a tsunami in Japan

Love like water and I am just sand

How you brought me down was like jumping from the sky

Skydiving, no parachute, and clouds in my eye

How you made burst was like a solar flare on the sun

Hot flashing, thinking fast

I hope you hid the gun

How you did this without notice was chemtrails up above

Breathe in, Breathe out; You call this love?

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