Love is equal

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 16:19 -- Halie3

One loves in order to be loved,
One saves in order to be saved.
Do we not all deserve to be loved?
Do we not all deserved to be saved?
I declare my love in marriage,
why can you not?
I tell the government that he is mine forever,
why can you not?
If you love, let others love.
If you marry, let others marry.
Let love be equal.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

love is about equality

nice poem in advocating the importance of love

expand your thoguhts further and continue to write

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