Love

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92010
United States
33° 9' 35.8056" N, 117° 17' 6.8892" W

A severed soul and a melancholy heart
Crashing tears
swollen hearts
frighten howls and horrifying screams
bitter blood
odious rope
dreadful cries
insanity fights
he rapes her eyes
tears her skin
all she dose is cry
as he lies

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is a sad poem

love is not suppose to hurt

love is give and take-it that is not happening, it's time to leave

very reflective piece-keep writing

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is a sad poem

love is not suppose to hurt

love is give and take-it that is not happening, it's time to leave

very reflective piece-keep writing

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