Love

Location

11226
United States
40° 38' 49.5312" N, 73° 57' 13.0176" W
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I treasure every moment,
Every second with you,
I smile, then I laugh,
When im around you,
My heart beats faster and faster,
Our love change for every season,
Love is my Desire
Love is our passion of our peace,
I love you,

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Comments

mz.sassy01

11 years ago

Hi everyone i really hope you liked my poem !! please coment or like if you enjyed my peom or what you liked about it or what i should fix please it would mean a lot to me .
Thank you!

ambercurry37

11 years ago

I liked it. The only thing I could comment on is the second to last line. It sort of throws off the rhythm of the poem. Other than that, great job.

lynnzpooh777

11 years ago

that is a great peom i need some one to help me with somthing like that if you dont mind

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