Love

Wed, 01/24/2018 - 12:00 -- shotz

Dear who loves me, 

      Why so far away? 

        Where I can’t see love

        smiling a mile away, in the rain 

        Love, dancing to the mute 

        words on the page no body sees. 

         Where is love at in this? 

        I’m losing the words to say 

        to love. Does love care to

        come closer? Why is love hiding from me?

      Don’t be afraid to come near me to learn. Why stay

       away from me, when love can get to know me? 

       Why bother me, when love can take a risk to be my friend,

        for awhile? Why keep a secret love, where no body

         knows who love is? Why the unknown of not attempting 

        to know me? Why so long to come home to me love? 

       Will I find love near, soon, or will love stay away until

        I am noon? Why take so long to talk to me, and walk with me, and hold

        my precious hands? Oh, love, discipline me with 

        lost words on those torn pieces. Will love find the 

        pieces, to the torn page of discipline? Will it take love some time, to come to me? 

       My love don’t touch me so soon with those kind words. How my love, loves

        me tonight. Love gives life to others, to care for me and no harm comes. 

 

        From,

         The one looking for love, answers. 

   Please also see me in person, to love me in thee open. Share the love, love.

 

 

 

 

       

 

 

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shotz

This poem refers to the lover who is looking at me at a distance to love me. 

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