Love 16
Let my love fall down
In your heart
Let it sway in the wind
And dance within
I don't want it to hurt anymore
Let alone myself
Don't let it burn
I've taken the bullet for you
All I ask
Is that you hold my hand
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I did not upload this... i dont know why it appeared
This is a nice poem though
Kodatsumaego
This is interesting. It is short but it is interesting... I can't quite put my finger on it.
In my humble opinion, I think you make a few contradictory statements, but they work. That is the beauty of this poem. It is simple. Yet is is complex. I think it clearly demonstrates how you must have been feeling in that moment.
I like it. :) Thanks for sharing. :)