Lost

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73034
United States
35° 42' 30.8304" N, 97° 24' 59.418" W

Stuck in the shadows no place to hide
No where to go on this endless ride
Obstacles centered on making it real
This pain is already an unwelcome deal

The darkness tries to overtake me
So i fight with all my strength to flea
These long spiraling halls that are bleak
My feelings are crushing me and making me weak

Why must I fight if I don't fit in
Perhaps sometimes darkness does win
But what if I fight and find a new path
One that doesn't evoke that treacherous wrath

Comments

swilson63

I wrote this poem to express how i was feeling at that point of time

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

compelling

its about finding oneself-life presents many things

its all about maneuver

keep writing and build off your thoughts

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