Loss

Sat, 05/01/2021 - 20:41 -- M7575

People that love life most are the ones that have lost the most. They realize what has value in their lives and do not play host to others that trivialize what matters most. Some take for granted what they have. What they don't realize is there are no rules, and can be played as fools and lose, lose, lose. Treasure the goodness in life, sacrifice for it and know the difference between trivial and pointless strife. If you don't know the difference you will lose until you do. I wish I could, but I cannot teach the difference to you.

 

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KevinBarriga

That was very deep the feeling of being loss well done!

M7575

Thank you

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