Losing it

Mon, 11/28/2016 - 16:56 -- Lobo174

My mind races a thousand miles
Stuck in this rut im drowning
Trying to swim up the water
I'm feeling lousy

Help me please, my mind is week
Rid me of these thoughts I cant breath
I cant believe what is real about me
I can't see I can't hear what they think about me

I'm feeling low
Lower than the depths of the sea
Can't breath
Can't see
Minds weak, body can't power through

The end Is here
The lights going
Down to the depths of hell
I'm going.

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