Lonely Tide

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The waves crash upon my feet

Rain pounds in a hypnotic beat

In comes the tide

As my thoughts move aside

 

The tide grows stronger

It lures me in

Tempting me with the thought

Of a world free from sin

 

It takes me down under

I hear it crash

Drifting to the center of the ocean

Home at last

 

I have wished of the sea

Dreamed about it all night

I can’t help but to feel

My decision was right

 

I have found my place

Where none will criticize

To be me, myself, and I

Without telling any lies

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