Little Candle

Sun, 09/29/2013 - 17:14 -- Hime16

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Little Candle burning bright,

dancing on beeswax and lumber.

May it light flicker so after I wake from my slumber.

Her little blaze is gentle, warming me with ease.

I'll often hesitate to leave her alone, for fear of a coming breeze.

On occasion, the melted wax she drips stings my hand for maybe a minute or more,

but if the dripping ever stops is when I will really be sore.

Gollum has his precious golden band and I have a delicate little flame.

May neither air nor liquid nor candle snuff separate us, for life will never be the same.

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