Lips <3

Found desire placed upon your lips
slipped into temptation
a mind boggling game, taking hold of my reins
controlling all of me
slipped into your arms and you caught me
it was all a sweet lie, a facade
we became victims of the same taunting game
trapped by desire
mistaking feelings for this thing called lust
a desire so strong that takes hold of your inner inhibitions
wishing to let go, wishing to move on
but captivated by your sweet lips
those lips that are like a hunter's trap
holding me prisoner to your sweet touch
desire, passion, lust stringing me along
wishing to take over
as I'm held captive by the taste of your sweet lips.

Comments

unspokenbeauty12

I am somewhat new to poetry and I look forward to hearing what all of you think (:

ambercurry37

Well, you did a good job. It has a nice ebb and flow to it. Keep it up!

Eunoia

trap (put some for rhyme to it)

This is really good for an early poem!

I like the use of mind boggling
yeah, like the above commenter, it flows nicely:)

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