Lightning

Around us

Darkening

Was the world.

 

It was cold,

Drying

From lack of rain.

 

But between us

 

I felt between us

Raging

An ocean of emotion.

 

Between us

Churning

Was a tempest so

 

Wild and dangerous,

It was beautiful.

 

And there

Striking

The waves

Shocking

The water

Cutting

The darkness with light

 

Was your touch.

 

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