Life Without Success

Thu, 08/15/2013 - 00:14 -- stalina

When you look at the sky

you see the stars shining bright

when you look at the stars

you see you're dreaming

when you look at the sky

you see you're life passin by

You look back at all those opportunities

you see that you didn’t try them

When you look at your own life

You see that they're missing

Make it happen

You need to get your body out of your shell

Don’t miss another opportunity

When you look at your friends

you see that they are success

you see that they have a life

you see that they have a living

but you don’t see yourself with them

You wonder

why didn't you go?

why didn't you run?

Why didn't you set another goal for an opportunity?

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