Life Through a Looking Glass

There is a place I go
To watch the world unfold
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I watch the pictures move efforlessly
across a nine inch, high definition screen
I put them there
I tell them their cue
I capture moments
That you can't re-do
Even mistakes are fun to view

There I sit
Watching this shit
Realizing that as I have watched all things pass
I have distorted the world
Through my own looking glass

Comments

robertflores

Very good

Blood_Rainicorn

thank you

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

can you imagine looking life through a glass that's clearer?
build on this poem
polish this further and challenge yourself to see beyond your immediate surrounding
keep writing

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