LIFE

A little girl holding her doll
Gazing thru her window while the night falls
As the stars start to appear
Her life grows throughout the years
The experiences has made her wiser
Lessons learned problems deciphered
Again looking out her own window
As she looks upon the moon while feeling the airflow
A sudden change in her life happens and now she knows
The peaceful night and the glow of the moon
Gave her a sense of another new tune
Difference in her walk, talk and moves
Never once thought the sadness could be removed
No more tears, no more pain, but she’ll remain…

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

beautiful story
this is part of the process of becoming a terrific poet
part of poems is expanding one's horizon
this poem displays your ability in developing more skills as a poet
great job nicki
check out a sad story i wrote-give me your input
i'll write another poem today-check it out

Reinanena

Thanks for the pointers, this is only the beginning...

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