Life

Awake Asleep Just waiting 

Noise Quiet Just thinking

Look Shut Just  being

Pain Shame Just feeling

Happy Sad Just Life  

Comments

beowulf1123

11 years ago

Just a blue mood 

Jasmin Dowling

8 years ago

I like this a lot, it's profound without being cheesy. Simple and sweet, and kind of thought provoking. 

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